Willows by Lucien Stryk

The poet and Zen scholar Lucien Stryk died yesterday at the age of eighty-nine. He was a professor at Northern Illinois University for decades, and published numerous volumes of his own poetry, as well as  translations of Zen poetry and books about Zen and Buddhism. He was my teacher and friend, and was very encouraging of my work years after I left school. Here is a great, and my favorite, poem by Lucien Stryk.



Willows

I was walking where the willows
ring the pond, meaning to reflect
on each, as never before, all
twenty-seven, examine twig by twig,
leaf by pointed leaf, those delicate
tents of greens and browns. I'd

tried before, but always wound up
at my leafless bole of spine, dead
ego stick, with its ambitions,
bothers, indignations. Times
I'd reach the fifth tree before
faltering, once the seventeenth.

Then, startled by grinding teeth,
sharp nails in the palm, turn back,
try again. Hoping this time to
focus on each bought, twig, leaf,
cast out all doubts that brought
me to the willows. This time

it would be different, could see
leaves shower from the farthest
tree, crown my head, bless my eyes,
when I awakened to the fact --
mind drifting to the trees ahead.
I was at fault again, stumbling to

the flap of duck, goose, a limping
footstep on the path behind,
sun-flash on the pond. Such excuse,
easy to find, whether by willows
or bristling stations of a life.
Once more, I'm off. This time

all's still. Alone no one to blame
distractions on but self. Turn in
my tracks, back to the starting point.
Clench, unclench my hands, breathe in,
move off telling the leaves like
rosary-beads, willow to willow. Mind

clear, eye seeing all, and nothing.
By the fifth, leaves open to me,
touch my face. My gaze, in wonderment,
brushes the water. By the seventh,
know I've failed. Weeks now, I've been
practicing on my bushes, over, over again.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

This is a beautiful and thought-provoking poem.

I find it sad that the author ees himself as having "failed." His efforts and mindfulness could be seen as a success; and end in themselves. There's no real success or failure, just the lovely process of appreciating nature in the moment.

Rebecca Feller said...

Christopher, it's Rebecca F. I posted the previous comment before about your friend's poem about Willows. Hope you and Ruth are well!